... leans in again to put the pin in) Young Dan's interior monologue: Of course I'm not a Dukakis fan, you think I'd support that ... in my most prized garment Young Dan's OTHER interior monologue (Herman's Head style): Would you chill ... from those pins close up after you wash them Young Dan's interior monologue: No they don't, that's just vile propaganda spread by the ...

... exhausted person inside me shrieks (usually in a British accent, because I have a British interior monologue) " you just did that for the past EIGHTY HOUUURRRRSS!" ... ... be doing something fun during my downtime? Something fun like drawing comics? ... it's about this time that I attempt to turn off my British interior monologue, and retreat to watching reruns of Law & ...

... Remember the past is the only pure resource you have. Telling the true story of the world in interior monologue. We all have that monologue going in our heads - so write it out! The jewel center of interest is the eye within the eye. Statements like this is what comes of hanging out with Dr. Leary. Write in recollection and amazement ...

... sketches, that my own stuff lacks narrative thrust and relies too heavily on interior monologue, that the world seems to revolve around the stationaty characters (its just that narrative ... If the rejects pile up high enough, I’ll just have to recalibrate and move on, or just keep writing as I do because that interior monologist lives in my head and has an irrepressible urge to get out, and ...

... the book should be from the main character's pov (reader needs to feel grounded), and omniscient pov is usually a sign of bad writing. 4. Interior monologue - rarely interesting and stops the story. Keep it short. Think as if you are writing for a theatre production being acted out - write only what you can act. 5. Character description ...

... stuff?!" Only I'm not saying "shoot" and "heck," of course. Well, I have small children in the house, so I'm not saying anything, just muttering the real words in my interior monologue. I need some kind of Phone App that will email me whenever a lunar calendar holiday is coming up, and I need to ...